The bar chart below shows the percentage e of Australian women and men in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2019. Summarises the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relavent
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The bar chart compares the proportion of females and males in numerous
age
categories who frequently did exercises in Australia in 2019.
Overall
, it is clear that
women
who did regular physical activity had the highest percentage in all age
groups. The figures showed that exercises are popular among youth
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young
men
more than women
. Meanwhile, people who are over 65 in both sexes had a similar number.
Looking in more detail, males from the 15-24 age
group were doing workouts more than females, with 52.8% and 47.7%, respectively, which is the highest percentage for men
in the chart. The proportions for the 25 to 34 and 35 to 44 age
groups are similar, as declined for the men
with 42.2%, then
dropped further
to 39.5%, while
the figures for women
increased, accounting for 48.9%, and rose further
, reaching 52.5%. The percentage of people who frequently did workouts among ages 45 to 64 was relatively similar, accounting for 53% for women
and 43% to 45% for men
. In contrast
, both genders over 65 years old did equally
physical activities, comprising 47%Change the word
equal
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