The chart below show UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006. Summarize the information y selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below show UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006. 

Summarize the information y selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart compares five types of energy consumed (
oil
, coal ,
gas
, nuclear power and other renewable sources ) in the
UK
and the
USA
in the years 2000 and 2006 .
Overall
,
UK
and
USA
consumption
fluctuated among types of energy throughout the years mentioned.
Gas
energy showed a massive increase ,
on the contrary
, coal
consumption
decreased dramatically for both the
USA
and the
UK
.
Firstly
, the
UK
was dependent mainly on
Oil
by 27% percent and Coal by 30% in 2000 . Coal
consumption
dropped to almost 25% ,
while
Oil
rose slightly to reach 30 % in 2006 .
Gas
witnessed a huge rise from 25% up to 39 % from 2000 to 2006 . nuclear power per cent rose as well in 2006 by roughly 7% .
Secondly
, the
USA
consumed more
Oil
in 2000 than any other source by 38% . The
consumption
increased by 2% in 2006 .
Gas
consumption
declined by 10% from 2000 to 2006 .Not only
Gas
consumed by the
USA
was lower by 10% in 2006 but
also
nuclear power and other renewable resources fell , but the total
consumption
of both is less than 10 % .
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, gas, uk, usa, consumption with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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