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The chart below show UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006. Summarize the information y selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below show UK and USA energy consumption in 2000 and 2006. Summarize the information y selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart compares five types of energy consumed (
oil
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 , coal ,
gas
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 , nuclear power and other renewable sources ) in the
UK
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 and the
USA
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 in the years 2000 and 2006 .
Overall
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,
UK
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 and
USA
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consumption
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 fluctuated among types of energy throughout the years mentioned.
Gas
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 energy showed a massive increase ,
on the contrary
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, coal
consumption
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 decreased dramatically for both the
USA
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 and the
UK
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 .
Firstly
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 , the
UK
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 was dependent mainly on
Oil
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 by 27% percent and Coal by 30% in 2000 . Coal
consumption
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 dropped to almost 25% ,
while
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Oil
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 rose slightly to reach 30 % in 2006 .
Gas
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 witnessed a huge rise from 25% up to 39 % from 2000 to 2006 . nuclear power per cent rose as well in 2006 by roughly 7% .
Secondly
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 , the
USA
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 consumed more
Oil
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 in 2000 than any other source by 38% . The
consumption
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 increased by 2% in 2006 .
Gas
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consumption
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 declined by 10% from 2000 to 2006 .Not only
Gas
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 consumed by the
USA
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 was lower by 10% in 2006 but
also
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 nuclear power and other renewable resources fell , but the total
consumption
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 of both is less than 10 % .

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, gas, uk, usa, consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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