Task1: The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports to four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the proportions of Australian
export
to 4 different countries between 1990 and 2012.
Fix the agreement mistake
exports
Overall
, although
China
and India
had forward
trend in 22 Add an article
a forward
years
old
period, Correct word choice
apply
US
and Correct article usage
the US
Japan
declined in these years
.
In 5 years
following 1995, while
Japan
with round
26% Correct your spelling
around
share
and US
with around 12% Correct article usage
the US
share
decline
rapidly to 20% and around 8% respectively, Wrong verb form
declined
China
rose smoothly from near zero to 3% share
and India
remained steadily at around 2%. In the following next 5 years
, however
US started to rose
its proportion other countries had the same previous period pattern.
In 2005, Verb problem
increase
while
China
rose significantly in the next 5 years
, from just over 10% to 25%, US
fell its percentage like its pattern in the Correct article usage
the US
5-yearold
past period. Correct your spelling
5-year old
India
rose its share
gradually 5
% to around 7% and Change preposition
from 5
Japan
approximately unchanged.
Between 2010 and 2012, while
India
declined slightly, US
and Correct article usage
the US
China
increased their share
gradually. Japan
had the same pattern which it had before.Submitted by ramenosko on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, india, years, japan, share with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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