You need to take leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need explain how you will keep up-to-date while you’re away suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Mr. Stika,
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during my annual leave. Althought
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task achievement
Clarify the reason for the leave, and make sure to address all points concisely.
coherence cohesion
Ensure paragraphs have one main idea for better readability.
suitable writing tone
Check for grammatical accuracy and use formal language.
task achievement
You have made an effort to inform your manager about your availability during your leave.
greeting and closing
The letter has a polite closing.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,