The diagrams below show the development of the village of Kelsbey between 1780 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate the transformation of Kelsbey village in three particular years, 1780, 1860, and 2000.
Overall
, it is evident that there was a major transformation of public facilities and housing areas,
whereas
natural
condition
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significantly vanished in over 100 centuries. In 1780, the Kelsbey village had a long
river
which was running from north to south
side
. There were four areas of farm beside the
river
, and a large
area
of
woods
was spotted on the east
side
of the farms.
In
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this
year, there were only 100 homes,
locating
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to
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the north
side
of the
woods
. By 1860, a bridge had been built to
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the
river
, with an additional road to the
residents
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area
.
While
the housing increased to 200 homes, the farms and
woods
area
showed a remarkable decreasing quantity in
this
year. Moving to the new century, 2000,
this
village exhibited wetlands for birds to the south
side
of the
river
and some shops were located adjacent to the
river
. As the housing
area
were
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developed
to
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500 buildings, schools and sports
field
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fields
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were
also
built on the southern
side
of the resident
area
. Those areas were connected by a new road between them. The farms and
woods
area
were totally gone in
this
year.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words river, side, area, woods with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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