The diagrams below show the development of the village of Kelsbey between 1780 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the transformation of Kelsbey village in three particular years, 1780, 1860, and 2000.
Overall
, it is evident that there was a major transformation of public facilities and housing areas, whereas
natural condition
significantly vanished in over 100 centuries.
In 1780, the Kelsbey village had a long Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
river
which was running from north to south side
. There were four areas of farm beside the river
, and a large area
of woods
was spotted on the east side
of the farms. In
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This
this
year, there were only 100 homes, locating
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located
to
the north Change preposition
on
side
of the woods
. By 1860, a bridge had been built to crossing
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cross
river
, with an additional road to the residents
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resident's
residents'
area
. While
the housing increased to 200 homes, the farms and woods
area
showed a remarkable decreasing quantity in this
year.
Moving to the new century, 2000, this
village exhibited wetlands for birds to the south side
of the river
and some shops were located adjacent to the river
. As the housing area
were
developed Change the verb form
was
to
500 buildings, schools and sports Change preposition
into
field
were Fix the agreement mistake
fields
also
built on the southern side
of the resident area
. Those areas were connected by a new road between them. The farms and woods
area
were totally gone in this
year.Submitted by chocolate10
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words river, side, area, woods with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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