The graph below shows the percentage of people in the different age group who went to the cinema once a month in Great Britain. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of people in the different age group who went to the cinema once a month in Great Britain. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the number of individuals based on varied age categories who visited the film hall once a month in Britain over a 30-year time period, starting from 1978. Units are given in percentages.
Overall
,
it is clear that
teenagers(14-24) are the most popular set of people who reach movie hall and the opposite is true for retirees(50+).
Moreover
,
similarly
, the positions of the percentage of people in category wise remained same over the time.
According to
the data, in 1978, teenagers(14-24) gained the most popularity enjoying movies with a figure of more than twice that of retirees(50+). The audience of teens
overall
decreased slightly with minor fluctuations and reached approximately 90% in 2008.
In contrast
, older people had a drastic downtrend by 10% in 1998 and surpassed its original value in 1991 and expanded to 52%.
Next,
the age groups of 25-30 and 35-49 followed a similar trend, starting from 80% and 60% in 1978 and decreasing heavily to 60% and 52% respectively, in 1988. Thereby, adults(25-30) followed an uptrend and reached their starting value
whereas
, the old generation(35-49) uptrend and reached below 70% in 2008.
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