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The table illustrates the proportion of people aged 65 and over in Canada, Germany and the UK in 1988, 2000 and an estimation of 2030.

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The figure displays the percentage of citizens, who lived 65
years
 and longer, in three different countries (
Canada
,
Germany
, and the United Kingdom) between the
years
 1988 and 2000 and the predictions in 2030.
Overall
,
lifespan
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the lifespan
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 of the people increased in
Canada
,
Germany
, and the UK between the
years
 1988 and 2000.
Moreover
, it is expected to be longer in 2030 for the individuals who live in those countries.
Firstly
, in the
years
 1988 and 2000,
Germany
 had the biggest
proporion
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proportion
 of elder citizens
of
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 the population with 20% and 25% respectively. Like in
Germany
, the percentage of
the
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people,
who
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aged 65 and over, in
Canada
had
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an
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increase
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 by 5% to 21% from 1988 to 2000,
while
 it reached 15% with only
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%
of
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rise in the UK in 2000.
On the other hand
,
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% addition to the proportion of senior citizens
are
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 predicted for all three countries in the next 30
years
. The highest percentage of individuals, who lived 65
years
 and more, is estimated in
Germany
,
while
Canada
 is predicted
at
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the second place with 26%.
Moreover
, a big jump for the UK is expected with 5% more people over 65 in the next 3 decades.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, canada, germany with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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