You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: · explain why you are selling the television · describe the television · suggest a date when your friend can come and see it

Dear Bob,
This
letter is to inform you about my plan to sell my TV by the end of
this
month. I'm
shifting
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moving
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to Canada by the end of October.
As a result
, I won't be able to take the TV with me because of customs enquiry at the airport, they'll probably seize it, and
also
the transportation cost from India to Canada is quite high. So, I'm looking forward to
sell
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selling
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it and
make
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some money out of it. It's a Samsung 43-inch TV with 4K resolution, AU9490 being the model number. I bought
this
in June 2024, and it's in great condition. The remote is completely clean and functional, and
also
with two
brand new
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AAA batteries.
Although
it is completely
bezel less
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, it comes with both wall-mount and table accessories. The original price was INR 90,000, but my asking price is INR 45,000.
However
, you can own
this
for INR 20,000. I'd suggest you
to
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come by
this
Saturday,
post lunch-time
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, between 3:30- 5 PM. I'm normally done with my daily house chores by
then
, so I'll be able to explain
you
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the specifications much better. Please let me know if you'd be interested in
this
. Looking forward to hearing back from you. Best wishes, Nilesh
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Ensure the letter provides all relevant details and doesn't rely on the reader's prior knowledge.
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Avoid minor grammatical errors for a higher score in language accuracy.
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The letter clearly explains the reason for selling the television.
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The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for the context.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the letter is logical and easy to follow.
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The opening and closing of the letter are well constructed.
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Each paragraph focuses on a single main idea, improving readability.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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