The line graph below shows the population size, birth rate and the death rate of England and Wales from 1700 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided line graph illustrates the proportion of
population
, Add an article
the population
number
of people born and number
of people die
in million in England and Correct pronoun usage
who die
Walves
between 1700 and 2000.
Correct your spelling
Wales
To begin
with, In 1700 the residents
Change to a genitive case
resident's
residents'
number
was alomst
2 Correct your spelling
almost
millions
, after 5 years the Change to singular
million
number
increased and reached at
10 Change preposition
apply
millions
. After a decade the population Change to singular
million
number
almost come
close to again 2 Verb problem
is
millions
. Change to singular
million
Moreover
, after 1800 the number
of people in England and Walves
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Wales
rosed
significantly and hit its peak Correct your spelling
rose
number
50 millions
in 2000.
Meanwhile, the birth Change to singular
million
rate
was 30 millions
in 1700 and it reflects little Change to singular
million
increased
in 1750 by 10 Replace the word
increase
millions
and it was steady through 1750 and 1800. After 1800 it Change to singular
million
starts
declining and Wrong verb form
started
reaches
22 Wrong verb form
reached
millions
in 1950. By 2000 the birth Change to singular
million
rate
number
higher than its initial number
. Similarly
, the death rate
was 26 millions
in 1700 and after 1700 it increased by almost 10 million and it was stable Change to singular
million
it
1800. After 1800 the Correct your spelling
in
number
showing
Wrong verb form
showed
downward
trend and reached Add an article
a downward
at
20 Change preposition
apply
millions
in 2000.
Change to singular
million
Overall
, the population growth shows a drastic upward trend through out
the period. Correct your spelling
throughout
However
, the birth rate
and death rate
was
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
parlle
to each other Correct your spelling
parallel
expect
from Correct your spelling
except
last
1 decadeCorrect article usage
the last
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, millions, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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