The chart shows the exchange rate between the US dollar and the British pound. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows the
comportament
of the USD vs Pound for 15 years between 1973 to 1988. Correct your spelling
comportment
compartment
overall
, the general trend
shows a slaghtly
decrease Correct your spelling
slightly
thougth all
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throughout
this
period with a 0.5 of diffents
between the Correct your spelling
differents
different
fist
year to the Correct your spelling
first
last
one. during 1977 and 1985, the graph hit the botton
of the Correct your spelling
bottom
trend
with 1.5 and 1.3 respectivitly
.
The first Correct your spelling
respectively
trend
shows a constant comportmente
in the transition Correct your spelling
comportment
compartment
of
1973 and 1974 ,after that, the Change preposition
between
trend
was completely trasformed
over the period when the value of the USD Correct your spelling
transformed
dolar
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dollar
reach
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reached
the
peak in 1975 with nearly 2.5 Change the word
its
dolar
per pound followed Correct your spelling
dollar
dollars
for
a dramatic drop during 1976 and 1977 with almost 1.5 in value. The second Change preposition
by
trend
shows a steady increase thougnt
the time until 1981Correct your spelling
thought
,
when the Remove the comma
apply
trend
was converted into a plateur
until 1982 when the Correct your spelling
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trend
was nocked
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knocked
tauching
the lowest value in 1985.
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touching
last
trend
after touching the botton
in 1985, shows a Correct your spelling
button
bottom
sharply
increase until 1988.Change the adverb
sharp
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