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The chart shows the exchange rate between the US dollar and the British pound. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the exchange rate between the US dollar and the British pound. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph shows the
comportament
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comportment
compartment
 of the USD vs Pound for 15 years between 1973 to 1988.
overall
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, the general
trend
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 shows a
slaghtly
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slightly
 decrease
thougth all
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throughout
this
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 period with a 0.5 of
diffents
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differents
different
 between the
fist
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first
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 year to the
last
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 one. during 1977 and 1985, the graph hit the
botton
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bottom
 of the
trend
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 with 1.5 and 1.3
respectivitly
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respectively
. The first
trend
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 shows a constant
comportmente
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comportment
compartment
 in the transition
of
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between
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 1973 and 1974 ,after that, the
trend
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 was completely
trasformed
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transformed
 over the period when the value of the USD
dolar
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dollar
reach
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reached
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the
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its
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 peak in 1975 with nearly 2.5
dolar
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dollar
dollars
 per pound followed
for
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by
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 a dramatic drop during 1976 and 1977 with almost 1.5 in value. The second
trend
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 shows a steady increase
thougnt
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thought
 the time until 1981
,
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apply
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 when the
trend
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 was converted into a
plateur
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plateau
plate
player
 until 1982 when the
trend
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 was
nocked
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knocked
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 down
tauching
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touching
 the lowest value in 1985. The
last
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trend
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 after touching the
botton
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button
bottom
 in 1985, shows a
sharply
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sharp
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 increase until 1988.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words trend with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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