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The diagram illustrates the process of lithography: a method used for printing newspapers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram illustrates the process of lithography: a method used for printing newspapers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where necessary. Write at least 150 words.
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The diagram demonstrates the
process
 of a special way to print newspapers. There are 6 stages to
this
process
 that begin with a rolling
roller
 and
ending
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 with drying
accompanying
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accompanied
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with
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by
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 warm and cold air , each of which will be described below. First of all, the first
roller
 is rotated and
assisted
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assists
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 to papers
to move
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in moving
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 through the
process
.
secondly
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secondly,
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 ink and water and chemicals are
being
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apply
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ready for initial
prepration
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preparation
 and
roller
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a roller
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 help
to
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apply
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them to sink in
chemicals
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the chemicals
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 and water.
Thirdly
 the inked paper was attached to
plate
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the plate
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 to prepare the paper for attachment.
Next
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 a
roller
 helps to provide a plate for attachment and converting papers to newspapers with text and pictures.
Then
 the couple-rollers assist
to attach
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in attaching
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 pictures and text to papers. Ultimately at
final
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 stage the printed newspaper is dried by hot and cold air to provide a mild situation for
this
process
.
In
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Overall
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overall
this
 diagram shows
that
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how
newspaper
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the newspaper
a newspaper
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 is made by a method
that
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apply
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called lithography
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