The maps below show the village of Stockford in 1930 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the village of Stockford in 1930 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The two maps given

illustrates

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illustrate

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the village of Stockford in

year

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the year

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1930 and 80 years later in 2010.

Overall

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, it can be observed that

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town

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the town

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of Stoke

ford

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Ford

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went under many developments and several new

facalities

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facilities

were

also

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added

into

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the

town

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. In the year 1930, there was a primary school located in the middle of the

town

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, in front of that were gardens containing a large house inside it. On the west side of the Primary school, several shops and a Post office were available. A bridge was situated in the northern part of the village and in the

north-eastern

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northeastern

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part of the village there was farmland just in front of the bridge and farmland was

also

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placed between the garden and River

stoke

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Stoke

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However

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, in the year 2010, shops were removed and lots of houses were constructed

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apply

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around the road that passes through the middle of the

town

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. Gardens and large houses were replaced by retirement

home

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homes

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and all the farmlands were diminished from the

town

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80 years later.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

172 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

aerial perspective
land use
agricultural land
rural
urban development
housing estate
residential area
commercial area
business park
shopping center
infrastructure
construct
roundabout
disappearance
green spaces
complexity
transformation
expansion
modernization

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The maps below show the village of Stockford in 1930 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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