The maps below show the village of Stockford in 1930 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The maps below show the village of Stockford in 1930 and in 2010.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The two maps given
illustrates
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illustrate
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the village of Stockford in
year
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the year
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1930 and 80 years later in 2010.
Overall
, it can be observed that
town
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the town
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of Stoke
ford
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Ford
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went under many developments and several new
facalities
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facilities
were
also
added
into
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to
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the
town
. In the year 1930, there was a primary school located in the middle of the
town
, in front of that were gardens containing a large house inside it. On the west side of the Primary school, several shops and a Post office were available. A bridge was situated in the northern part of the village and in the
north-eastern
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northeastern
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part of the village there was farmland just in front of the bridge and farmland was
also
placed between the garden and River
stoke
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Stoke
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.
However
, in the year 2010, shops were removed and lots of houses were constructed
in
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around the road that passes through the middle of the
town
. Gardens and large houses were replaced by retirement
home
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homes
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and all the farmlands were diminished from the
town
80 years later.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • aerial perspective
  • land use
  • agricultural land
  • rural
  • urban development
  • housing estate
  • residential area
  • commercial area
  • business park
  • shopping center
  • infrastructure
  • construct
  • roundabout
  • disappearance
  • green spaces
  • complexity
  • transformation
  • expansion
  • modernization
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