The maps below show the village of Stockford in 1930 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The two maps given
illustrates
the village of Stockford in Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrate
year
1930 and 80 years later in 2010.
Change the article
the year
Overall
, it can be observed that town
of Stoke Correct article usage
the town
ford
went under many developments and several new Capitalize word
Ford
facalities
were Correct your spelling
facilities
also
added into
the Change preposition
to
town
.
In the year 1930, there was a primary school located in the middle of the town
, in front of that were gardens containing a large house inside it. On the west side of the Primary school, several shops and a Post office were available. A bridge was situated in the northern part of the village and in the north-eastern
part of the village there was farmland just in front of the bridge and farmland was Correct your spelling
northeastern
also
placed between the garden and River stoke
.
Capitalize word
Stoke
However
, in the year 2010, shops were removed and lots of houses were constructed in
around the road that passes through the middle of the Change preposition
apply
town
. Gardens and large houses were replaced by retirement home
and all the farmlands were diminished from the Fix the agreement mistake
homes
town
80 years later.Submitted by vishank.chauhan19504 on
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