the graph below shows the consumption of three spreads from 1981 to 2007.

the graph below shows the consumption of three spreads from 1981 to 2007.
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The illustrated line graph represents the number of
grams
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of consumed spreads (margarine, low fat & reduced spreads,
butter
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) from 1981 to 2007. As can be seen,
butter
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usage rapidly decreased for the duration of time
while
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law fat goods, that were just recently created, experienced quick uplift. As presented in the diagram, margarine commodities prevailed consistently, with just a slight fluctuation during the period between 1981 and 2001. Afterwards, the trend decreased sharply.
On the contrary
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,
butter
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started at the peak of the chart, but in 1986 it significantly dropped to approximately 100
grams
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in 1991.
Then
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the line kept reducing until reaching nearly 50
grams
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in 2007. As for reduced fat spreads,
firstly
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manufactured in 1996, the trend speedily reached the level of roughly 80
grams
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in 2001 and
then
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steadily fell until 2007. At the beginning of the represented period,
butter
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was the steady leader of the chart, but
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the end, a newly created low-fat spread took over the initiative and became a leading commodity in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grams, butter with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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