the graph below shows the consumption of three spreads from 1981 to 2007.
The illustrated line graph represents the number of
grams
of consumed spreads (margarine, low fat & reduced spreads, Use synonyms
butter
) from 1981 to 2007. As can be seen, Use synonyms
butter
usage rapidly decreased for the duration of time Use synonyms
while
law fat goods, that were just recently created, experienced quick uplift.
As presented in the diagram, margarine commodities prevailed consistently, with just a slight fluctuation during the period between 1981 and 2001. Afterwards, the trend decreased sharply. Linking Words
On the contrary
, Linking Words
butter
started at the peak of the chart, but in 1986 it significantly dropped to approximately 100 Use synonyms
grams
in 1991. Use synonyms
Then
the line kept reducing until reaching nearly 50 Linking Words
grams
in 2007. As for reduced fat spreads, Use synonyms
firstly
manufactured in 1996, the trend speedily reached the level of roughly 80 Linking Words
grams
in 2001 and Use synonyms
then
steadily fell until 2007. At the beginning of the represented period, Linking Words
butter
was the steady leader of the chart, but Use synonyms
Linking Words
at
the end, a newly created low-fat spread took over the initiative and became a leading commodity in 2007.Change preposition
in
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