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The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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he
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The
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 two given illustrations represent the current state of the infrastructure,
along with
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suggested
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a suggested
the suggested
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 plan for the upgrade. It can be clearly seen, that
new
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the new
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 plan offers to add up
a
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apply
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road
Use synonyms
 A4,
what
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which
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 would connect
road
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 A2 with the Town
center
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 and the railway. The diagram clearly shows that
air
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the
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 field
rather to
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should
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 be substituted by
industrial
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an industrial
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 estate, and
to get
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be
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 connected to
railway
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the railway
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road
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.
Additional
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An additional
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 roundabout might be added at the intersection with the railway, A2 and the town
center
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, just above the gas station.
An access
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Access
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 might be granted by connecting to A2, through the perpendicular
road
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.
Overall
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, all
mentioned
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the above-mentioned
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 changes might reduce congestion and make transport in the city gradually more efficient.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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