The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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two given illustrations represent the current state of the infrastructure,

along with

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plan for the upgrade. It can be clearly seen, that

new

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the new

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plan offers to add up

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apply

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road

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what

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which

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would connect

road

A2 with the Town

center

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and the railway. The diagram clearly shows that

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field

rather to

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be substituted by

industrial

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an industrial

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estate, and

to get

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connected to

railway

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the railway

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road

Additional

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An additional

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roundabout might be added at the intersection with the railway, A2 and the town

center

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, just above the gas station.

An access

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Access

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might be granted by connecting to A2, through the perpendicular

road

Overall

, all

mentioned

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the above-mentioned

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changes might reduce congestion and make transport in the city gradually more efficient.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

116 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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