The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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related to sales of Fairtrade-labelled

coffee

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and bananas from 1999 to 2004 in specific European countries.

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, in both highlighted items,

Switzerland

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gained the most amount of money in 1994.

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position in terms of income from

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production belongs to England in 2004.

Switzerland

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obtained 3

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euros

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from

coffee

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in 1999 as abovementioned

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amount is the highest compared to the other countries in

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year.

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Swidish

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Swedish

people achieved a negligible 0.8

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euros

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from

coffee

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in 1999.

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, all countries except England and

Switzerland

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experienced a stable

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from 1999 to 2004 in terms of

income's

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achievement from

coffee

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witnessed a dramatic

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from 1.5

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euros

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in 1999 to 20

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euros

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in 2004. It is obvious that

Switzerland

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obtained the highest level of money from bananas over the period

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a staggering 15 and 47

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euros

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in 1999 and 2004 respectively.

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, Belgium gained the lowest rate of income from bananas in 1999, a mere 0.6

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country overtook Sweden in 2004.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, switzerland, million, euros with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Topic Vocabulary:

Fairtrade-labelled
sales figures
percentage increase/decrease
European countries
sales volume
notable trend
exponential growth
moderate rise
marked decline
comparative analysis
economic factors
consumer preferences

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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the airport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time. Write to your friend, In your letter Explain the situation Offer to make alternative arrangements.

n many countries, people like to eat a wider variety of food than can be grown in their local area. As a result, much of the food people eat today has to come from other regions. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

write a referral letter to an endocrinologist