The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate student who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied bar charts indicate how many
students
with bachelor
or Change noun form
bachelor's
master
degrees did not prefer to Change noun form
master's
work
in full-time jobs after university in the United Kingdom in 2008.
It can be clearly seen that the highest percentage of students
whether graduated or postgraduated tended to continue their further
study in the UK. However
, students
did not choose to attend to voluntary work
in
full-time in England over the period.
In 2008, exactly 29,665 Change preposition
apply
of
graduated Change preposition
apply
students
liked to study further
in the UK, which was considerably more than the number of postgraduated
learners with 2,725 in the UK. (Which Correct your spelling
postgraduate
were
the highest percentage of graduate and postgraduate Correct subject-verb agreement
was
students
over the period). Moreover
, the number of students
with bachelor
Change noun form
bachelor's
degree
who liked to Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
work
in part-time jobs was 17,735, compared to the percentage of master scholars with 2,535 students
in the United Kingdom in 2008.
In contrast
, both graduated and postgraduated students
did not prefer to work
in voluntary jobs in England in 2008 with 3500 and 345 learners, respectively. (Which were the least number of students
over the whole year).Submitted by TUTOO on
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