The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate student who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided bar charts indicate the
number
of students
who had bachelor's or master's degrees and did not tend to work
in
full-time after graduation in the United Kingdom in 2008.
A glance at the graph reveals that the highest percentage of graduate or postgraduate learners chose to continue Change preposition
apply
further
study in England. However
, students
did not prefer to work
voluntary
in the UK over the period.
In 2008, exactly 29,665 Change the adjective
voluntarily
students
with a bachelor's degree decided to follow
Verb problem
pursue
further
study in England, (which was the highest number
of students
over the period) compared to the number
of graduated scholars who tended to work
in part-time jobs with 17,735 people in 2008. Moreover
, doing further
study by students
with a master's degree was a bit as popular as working part time
in the UK in 2008 with 2,725 and 2,535, respectively.
Add a hyphen
part-time
In contrast
, Graduate students
did not prefer to work
in voluntary jobs with 3500 students
in the UK in 2008. (Which was the least number
of graduate scholars over the whole year). Similarly
, 345 students
with a master's degree chose to do voluntary works
in England in 2008. (Which was the lowest percentage of postgraduate learners who did not tend to Fix the agreement mistake
work
work
full-time over the period).Submitted by TUTOO on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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