The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the alterations in the proportion of possessing cars families in a particular country in Europe from 1971 to 2001.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that people
who have two car
experienced an upward trend, Change to a plural noun
cars
while
the opposite trend was for people
who owned no car
. Additionally
, when it came to the modern era, the tendency to get one
car
became dominating.
In 1971, the percentage of people
who had not
Correct your spelling
no
transports
was significant at approximately 50%, Fix the agreement mistake
transport
while
folks that had one
and two cars were at nearly 35% and 18%, respectively. By 1981, the percentage of no cars declined slightly by about 6% and the two-automobile owners
had a
Correct article usage
apply
climb
to 30% and Wrong verb form
climbed
people
with one
car
experienced a little fluctuation.
In 1991 and 2001, the oer
cent of no-Correct your spelling
per
car
owners
was at the same level at exactly 30%. For one
-car
owners
it was just under 20% in 1991, but after Add a comma
owners,
one
decade it soared up to his
peak point at roughly 43%. The two-Correct pronoun usage
its
car
owners
was
at almost 20% in 1991, and it Change the verb form
were
also
increased by exactly 10%.Submitted by Kawasaki on
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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