The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given chart illustrates the data about households with

cares'

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changes in European

country

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countries

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This

information was reported every 10 years :

1971

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in 1971

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, 1981, 1991,

2001

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and 2001

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Overall

car

ownership was

uplift

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every 10 years.

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the beginning , autos were not popular , and

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From

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1971 to 1991 ,

rate

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the rate

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of citizens without

car

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a car

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was demanded ,

however

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by 2001 ,

amount

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the number of

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individuals with 1

car

was the highest. In 1971 ,

people

with no

car

consisted nearly 50

percent

, and 1

car

owners

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owner

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was 35

percent

. Two

car

owners

was

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approximately two times

fewers

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fewer

than

people

with 1 auto. (15 %) After 10 years , citizens without

cars

decreased by 7 rate ,

nonetheless

people

with 1 and 2

cars

had

same

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rate with

difference

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a difference

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of 3

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percent

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per cent

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.(31 and 29).

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in 1991, all indicators represented the lowest gauges . In 2001,

people

with 1 and 2

cars

, uplifted by 10

percent

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per cent

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than in 1971,

however

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however,

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citizens

citizents

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citizens

without

cars

decreased by 20

percent

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per cent

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overall

overal

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overall

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, people, percent, cars with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "uplift" was used 2 times.

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The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smart phones. Why is this, the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example for your own knowledge or experience.