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The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes in the percentage of households with cars in one European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart illustrates the data about households with
cares'
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cares
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 changes in European
country
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countries
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.
This
 information was reported every 10 years :
1971
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in 1971
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 , 1981, 1991,
2001
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and 2001
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 .
Overall
 ,
car
 ownership was
uplift
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 every 10 years.
At
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In
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 the beginning , autos were not popular , and
In
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From
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 1971 to 1991 ,
rate
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the rate
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 of citizens without
car
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a car
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 was demanded ,
however
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however,
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 by 2001 ,
amount
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the number of
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individuals with 1
car
 was the highest. In 1971 ,
people
 with no
car
 consisted nearly 50
percent
 , and 1
car
owners
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owner
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 was 35
percent
 . Two
car
 owners
was
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were
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 approximately two times
fewers
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fewer
 than
people
 with 1 auto. (15 %) After 10 years , citizens without
cars
 decreased by 7 rate ,
nonetheless
,
people
 with 1 and 2
cars
 had
same
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the same
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 rate with
difference
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a difference
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3
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of 3
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percent
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per cent
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.(31 and 29).
Additionally
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 in 1991, all indicators represented the lowest gauges . In 2001,
people
 with 1 and 2
cars
 , uplifted by 10
percent
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per cent
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 than in 1971,
however
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however,
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citizens
citizents
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citizens
 without
cars
 decreased by 20
percent
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per cent
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overall
overal
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overall
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, people, percent, cars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "uplift" was used 2 times.
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