The chart below shows the value of one country's export in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country's export in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The chart graph illustrates the value of a single country in 5 different types of
exports
during 2015 and 2016.
While
the table shows the increasing and decreasing of percentages during these
exports
. In
this
essay, I will discuss the difference in both during
this
period.
firstly
, during 2015 the
exports
of petroleum products and engineering goods were 62% and 57% which is more huge than others.
Furthermore
, gems and jewellery are 42% which is near to the agricultural products which is 32%. AT the
last
, the textile is the lowest value which is nearly 28%. In 2016, the product category had some changes in their percentages. the petroleum product and agricultural products have
little
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bit increasing that was 3% and 0.81%.
Moreover
, engineering goods and textiles are growing in huge amounts which are 8.5% and 15.24%.
However
, the only gems and jewellery decreased to 5.18%.
To sum up
, the chart shows the differences in the
exports
and the prices of how many spend.
On the other
hand
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the table shows the percentage which shows the benefits or drawbacks of
exports
.
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