The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The two maps above depict information about the development of the village of Ryemouth in the years 1995 and now.
Overall
, it can be seen that there were some changes, and some areas were also
removed or transformed into other areas.
First,
the farmland and forest park have been removed and altered with sports games like golf and tennis. On the other hand
, the housing opposite the road from the west side has been increased. At present, they are making an extension to the road towards the houses. The area must be shared with other sites, such
as the hotel where they are provided with a car park. Furthermore
, at present the shops are removed and replaced with restaurants.
Afterwards, in 1995 there was a fish market opposite the sea and fishing port. Moreover
, the fish market has been removed and changed with 4 apartments and the finishing port has been removed also
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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