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The line graph below shows the number of complaints received by the complaints department of a single airline over a six-month period in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the number of complaints received by the complaints department of a single airline over a six-month period in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features making comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the number of
complaints
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 sent to the complaint department of a specific airline from January to June
in
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2009.
It is clear that
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 received
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complaints
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 by person and via telephone increased,
while
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 email or fax decreased over a 6-month period. Looking at the details, the
complaints
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 sent by person started at over 400
cases
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, which became the lowest point in general at that time. After that, the opinion of customers increased sharply to around 1900. Regarding
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via telephone, which declined slightly in
Februaary
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February
 exactly 800
cases
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, before growing
up
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gradually to around 1600
cases
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.
On the contrary
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 with
complaints
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 by email or fax, there was a downward trend, which started at about 800. After 4 months, the figures for the opinion by email or fax declined significantly to around 400
cases
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 in May. The number of
complaints
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 remains unchanged from May to June with 400

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words complaints, cases with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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