The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural/and becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural/and becomes

less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of

the world during the 1990s.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart provides information about average monthly
student
spendings
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in the UK in 2016. The bar graph illustrates sources of
student
income
in 2016.
Overall
,
students
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biggest payment is their rent. The least amount of
money
spent on travel by
students
.
Student
loans are the biggest
money
source for
students
,
while
grants and funding are the smallest.  The highest amount of
money
spent on rent by
students
, with 385
pounds
. The second-largest portion
on
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the monthly
student
expenditure pie chart is food.
Students
spent 124
pounds
for
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food. Following food,
students
spent 91
pounds
on other stuff, 69
pounds
on bills, and 64
pounds
on socializing.
Students
spend the least amount of
money
for
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travel, which is 52
pounds
. The biggest
income
sources for
students
are
student
loans, with 80 per cent. The
income
from family and a part-time job is similar, at approximately 65 per cent. The smallest
income
sources for
students
are grants and funding, followed by bank overdrafts and savings, all at under 60 per cent.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words student, income, students, money, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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