The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
graph shows how many Britain inhabitants donated some funds to charity depending on their age, it reports the contrasts between the data of the years 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, it is clear that
people over 36 years old donate more money to charity than the youth, generally the percentage trend increases with ageing during both periods of time that are considered.
Diving deeper, the amount of donors not in their fifths yet in 1990 is much more consistent rather than the one registered in 2010. Although
this
trend does not continue for older generations it seems to be more generous now with respect than in the past.
Nowadays young workers are the ones that are less involved in charity reaching only 5%, while
over 40% of the middle-aged British population in 1990 were donors.Submitted by matilderestelli.work on
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