Some people like to work in small companies or business while others prefer working for large companies of government organizations. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for a large company or organization?
Although
some people would argue that working for start-ups are
better than working for large institutions, others prefer to work at big and well-known companies. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
This
essay will discuss the pros and cons of working at large companies or organizations.
First and foremost, there are many advantages of being part of huge
establishment Correct article usage
a huge
for instance
, big firms are giving more benefits to the employees such
as salary and better health insurance. Also
, people that
Correct pronoun usage
who
works
for large organizations are more appealing to other institutions as they have the experience of being part of massive Change the verb form
work
firm
which can indicate that they have certain skills that are valuable for the work environment. Fix the agreement mistake
firms
Therefore
it help
the individual in his future career.
Change the verb form
helps
On the other hand
, there can be some challenges that should be consider
if someone Change the verb form
be considered
was
planning to be part of Wrong verb form
is
well-known
business. Correct article usage
a well-known
for example
, it is harder to get promotions as well as
there are many people competing against each other for getting
promoted. Change preposition
to get
In
addition
small organizations can help employees to get the most experience in Add a comma
addition,
short
time as there are not many workers there so each employee Add an article
a short
have
more Correct subject-verb agreement
has
reposibilities
and duties and Correct your spelling
responsibilities
it
must be executed perfectly.
Correct pronoun usage
they
To sum up
all the above, big companies can be good and bad, but i
believe Change the capitalization
I
that
is
Correct your spelling
it
depend
on the point of view of the worker as mentioned there are some advantages and disadvantages and the employee should consider that and think if the large organization are the suitable solution or not.Wrong verb form
depends
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coherence cohesion
While the introduction and conclusion are present, they could be more impactful. Ensure that your introduction clearly sets out what will be discussed, and your conclusion effectively summarizes the main points.
task achievement
Some sentences could be more concise and clear. For example, 'people that works for large organizations are more appealing' can be corrected to 'people who work for large organizations are more appealing.'
task achievement
The essay addresses both the advantages and disadvantages of working for large companies, fulfilling the task requirements.
coherence cohesion
The main points are well-supported with relevant examples, showing a clear understanding of the topic.
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