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The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data illustrate the percentage of
women
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 and
men
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 students studying different art-related
subjects
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 at UK University in 2011.
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,
women
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 who are studying art-related
subjects
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 have the highest ratio in all categories,
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, the lowest preparation in all
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 was for males studying philosophy, whilst the highest percentage was for the female who studies English language and literature. The highest
three
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subjects
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 in percentage are linguistics, English and literature and communication and media stud in all
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subjects
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women
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 are more than
men
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, in English females are around 250% and males are just below 250% , linguistics and communication are almost the same
women
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 just under 250 per
cent
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 and
men
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 just over 200 per
cent
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 and just under 200%. The remaining
three
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subjects
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 are the lowest in ratio, in philosophy,
men
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 are 50 per
cent
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 and
women
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 are one approximately
three
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 times
men
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 preparation, history and archaeology the two percentages are almost the same, females just over 100% and males just below 100% ,
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, art and design all preparation is over 150 per
cent
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 for male and female
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