The line graph illustrates the percentage of recyclation of four various materials in a particular country between 1982 to 2010.

The line graph illustrates the percentage of recycling of four various materials in a particular country between 1982 to 2010.

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, the plastic that has been recycled started late between 1986 And 1990,

in

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contrast

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paper and cardboard have the highest ratio of recycling throughout the given period, whilst the lowest amount of percentage that has been recycled goes to plastics. To go into detail, the highest two

preparation

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preparations

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in the graph

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paper and cardboard And glass containers, paper and cardboard

were having

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the highest recycling in 1982 and

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raised until around 1986 when it fluctuated throughout the years and in 2010 it was the first material that been recycled,

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glass containers started with approximately 50 per cent and

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dropped to around 40% after that, it dramatically increased until 2010. The remaining two materials are aluminium cans and plastics, the aluminium cans started being recycled around the year 1986 and quickly

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over

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time.