Train service in your area is reduced. Write a letter to your train company - explain how it affects you - describe the situation - tell the train company what you would like them to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
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letter to discuss the problem,I
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been facing because of
train
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service is not regular in my area. I have a full-time job in
Toronto
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and I am living in Mississauga which is 30km far and it is
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to 5 job. I have to
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update
every day from Mississauga to
Toronto
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. Before, it was very easy for me to commute there
through
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train
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because buses
take
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hours
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to
reah
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reach
Toronto
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.But, recently I
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seen drastic changes in
schedule
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the schedule
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of
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the train
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train
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trains
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. In three
hours
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, there is only one
train
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route going
in
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Toronto
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.
Whereas
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,
last
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month
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train
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the train
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was scheduled after every 30 minutes. I don't know the reason why the schedule is changed. It is
giving
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causing
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so
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me so
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many problems
in
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my work
hours
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. Every day I have to
reach
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catch
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the first
train
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, if I miss that
train
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I have to wait for
next
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the next
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three
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. And
in
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bus it will take two
hours
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which is only 30 minutes in tain. I am
student
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a student
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here, I cannot afford a car, so for
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me,
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public transport is the only option to go
for
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to
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work. Even
the
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though the
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prices of
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is too high in Mississauga, trains are so reliable as well
asreasonable
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as reasonable
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. So, it is my humble request to change the time or to schedule
atleast
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at least
two trains in one hour, which will be very beneficial for people like me who have only public transport to commute. Yours faithfully, Sim
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coherence cohesion
Consider breaking long sentences into shorter ones for better readability and to avoid run-on sentences.
task achievement
Explain the specific problems caused by the reduced train service more clearly, such as arriving late for work or missing important meetings.
writing tone
The letter maintains a polite and formal tone, suitable for the purpose of the communication.
greeting and closing
The letter opens with a clear introduction and ends with a respectful closing, ensuring the reader understands the main issue and the desired resolution.
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