3.The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries.

3.The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries.
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The line graph provides information about the average of Australia's four export countries from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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although
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Japan is the biggest exporter, output fell there and in the United States over the period. Meanwhile, there were significant rises in the exporter’s levels from the country China. In 1990,
exports
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in Japan were the biggest percentage of the charts, responsible for almost 26 per
cent
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of
exports
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in Australia. The next highest exporters were the United States, with around 11 per
cent
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each, which is almost nine times the output of average India. Export output fell steadily in Japan over the twenty-two years,
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, and despite the surge in the 20s, exporters in the Australian graphs United States cut their percentage dramatically by 2010, and in 2012 just upper by Indian
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, they accounted for only around 6 per
cent
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exports
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them.
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, china was big advanced because there were started exporters by Australia around 1 per
cent
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by 1990, after the end of the year there was a dramatic increase of almost 28 per
cent
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while
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the other three countries were deceased.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, cent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • exports
  • timeline
  • analyze
  • significant increase/decrease
  • trade relationships
  • economic dependencies
  • stability
  • fluctuation
  • political events
  • Country A/B/C/D
  • trends
  • insights
  • compare/comparison
  • examine
  • reveal
  • indicate
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