The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse- gas emission which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts compare the percentages of
energy
usage in various categories within an average Australian household and the corresponding greenhouse gas emissions
resulting from this
consumption
.
Over the whole time period, heating consumes the most energy
, while
water
heating is responsible for the highest emission of greenhouse gases, indicating a discrepancy between energy
use and environmental impact across the categories.
Focusing on energy
consumption
, heating emerges as the primary energy
user, accounting for 42% of total household energy
, illustrating its central role in domestic energy
use. Water
heating follows at 30%, underscoring its significant energy
demand. Conversely
, other appliances, refrigeration, and lighting have lower energy
utilizations at 15%, 7%, and 4% respectively, with cooling using a minimal 2%. This
distribution suggests a prioritization of heating and water
heating in energy
allocation within homes.
In contrast
, the emission chart reveals a different pattern. Despite its high energy
consumption
, water
heating leads to the largest share of emissions
at 32%, suggesting that it is less energy
-efficient or relies on more carbon-intensive energy
sources. Appliances are also
major contributors to emissions
, generating 28%, which is disproportionately high compared to their energy
consumption
. Interestingly, heating, which is the largest consumer of energy
, only accounts for 15% of the emissions
. This
indicates a more efficient or possibly cleaner energy
usage. Refrigeration and lighting contribute to 14% and 8% of emissions
, respectively, with cooling again contributing the least at 3%.Submitted by a.seytzhanova on
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