Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

A downright variance of view has been observed among

masses

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regarding learning multiple

subjects

and getting recognition

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their chosen core subject.A social segment of the society contends that studying

subjects

other than

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their main subject can be beneficial ,opponents meanwhile ,adhere to the notion of learning their chief course is notorious .The

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paragraphs will proffer an insight

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the doctrine and explain

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why learning multiple aspects can lead them to gain

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in their lives . Not endorsed by

everone

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everyone

,yet approved by some individuals that

relying

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on

main

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branch of knowledge consequences expertise and recognition.

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,a student who

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devote

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all his

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and focus on only one subject has wide experience to their degree,

as a result

, they are highly recommendable for

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job. Disjunctive to

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,the idea of studying other

subjects

acts

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more beneficial tool which is attested by a

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of people.The fundamental element associated with

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mechanism is the advantage of increasing

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chance of getting job opportunities ,as most

of

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companies hire employees who are multitasking and have expertise and experience in various fields.Another worth-considering element analogous to the idea of having knowledge and experience about various

subjects

can contribute to

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fabric,

for instance

,

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adults who have multitasking and

problem solving

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skills can resolve and guide the segment of society.

To conclude

,both

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arguments carry their own reasoning,logic and pragmatism.Albeit ,studying various

subjects

seems advantageous in the long run

due to

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weight,indispensable and fringe benefits.