You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph shows the percentages of Australian exports with four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

You should write at least 150 words.
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The data illustrate the proportions of the exportations that Australia did with four nations.
Overall
, in 1990 China had the lowest ratio but over the years it rose to be the highest country in 2012,
however
, Japan has dropped from the first nation in the graph to second place in 2012, US and India
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almost maintained the same throughout the given period. To go into detail, the two countries that have the most exports from Australia are Japan and China, China has fluctuated over time. It was around one per cent in 1990 and
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it dramatically increased to around 27%,
moreover
, Japanese were just over a quarter percentage in 1990 which was the topmost ratio in that year,
then
, it decreased to approximately 17%, to be the second country that receives exports from Australia. The remaining two countries are the US and India, the United States was just above 10% and it fell to about 7%,
finally
, India with a percentage around five in 2012 became the lowest nation of all countries.
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  • line graph
  • percentage
  • fluctuate
  • steady increase/decrease
  • notable rise/drop
  • peak
  • trough
  • comparative analysis
  • export destinations
  • trade relations
  • upsurge
  • downturn
  • economic ties
  • exponential growth
  • over the period
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