The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.

The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major

categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom,

and Japan in the year 2009.
The bar chart illustrates portions of consumption in the most important sections (
food
, housing,
transportation
,
health
care
and clothing) in four countries ( United States, Canada, United Kingdom and Japan) in 2009 The
overall
trend shown in the data is a rise in the proportion of expenditures on
food
, housing and
transportation
,
coupled with
a decline in the rate of expenditure on
health
care
and clothing in all countries. In the United States, Canada and the United Kingdom , the consumption of housing was the highest, approximately 26% in the US ,
While
the lowest was on clothing , just under 5%.
Whereas
, in Canada consumed
similarly
on housing and
transportation
at the rate of 20%, with
food
consumption a close second. In the United Kingdom, they consumed
food
,
transportation
, clothing and
health
care
around ( 21% , 15% , 6% and 3% respectively ). Differently, in Japan, the expenditure on
food
was the highest at 23 % ,
while
on
health
care
was the lowest, just below 4%.
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