You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram shows the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the
process
of manufacturing bricks
in a series of steps. The process
shows how brick manufacturing is from start to finish. The chart details the various stages involved in the process
.
The process
begins with collecting the clay by digger,
and Remove the comma
apply
then
filtered
the clay from any other materials Wrong verb form
filtering
by
Change preposition
with
metal
grid and roller. Add an article
the metal
a metal
Initially
, the sand mixed
up with water to become liquid, and next drop the liquid Add a missing verb
is mixed
into
the Add a missing verb
is into
bricks
moulds before Fix the agreement mistake
brick
begin
Change the verb form
beginning
process
Correct article usage
the process
further
. Following
this
, putting
the Verb problem
apply
bricks
in drying
oven to become drought for 24 -48 hours.
Correct article usage
a drying
Subsequently
, the bricks
material is heated with
moderate temperature to high temperature. Change preposition
from
Finally
, the stage before the ends
of the Fix the agreement mistake
end
process
should cool the chamber with
different temperatures to become dried, Change preposition
at
this
might take 48 -72 hours for cooling
the Change preposition
to cool
bricks
. Overall
, the process
involves 8 stages from collecting clay to the
cooling the Correct article usage
apply
bricks
.
The process
concludes with packaging the bricks
in the pellets for delivery. The components are assembled, and the final product is checked quality
for delivery.Change preposition
for quality
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, bricks with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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