You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram shows the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram shows the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the
process
of manufacturing
bricks
in a series of steps. The
process
shows how brick manufacturing is from start to finish. The chart details the various stages involved in the
process
. The
process
begins with collecting the clay by digger
,
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and
then
filtered
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filtering
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the clay from any other materials
by
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with
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metal
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the metal
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grid and roller.
Initially
, the sand
mixed
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up with water to become liquid, and next drop the liquid
into
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is into
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the
bricks
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brick
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moulds before
begin
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beginning
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process
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the process
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further
.
Following
this
,
putting
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the
bricks
in
drying
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a drying
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oven to become drought for 24 -48 hours.
Subsequently
, the
bricks
material is heated
with
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from
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moderate temperature to high temperature.
Finally
, the stage before the
ends
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end
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of the
process
should cool the chamber
with
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at
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different temperatures to become dried,
this
might take 48 -72 hours
for cooling
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to cool
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the
bricks
.
Overall
, the
process
involves 8 stages from collecting clay to
the
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apply
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cooling the
bricks
. The
process
concludes with packaging the
bricks
in the pellets for delivery. The components are assembled, and the final product is checked
quality
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for quality
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for delivery.
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