The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram illustrates what percentage of
people
in different age groups do reading in 1990 and 2010.
Overview, most Use synonyms
people
in the middle-aged group make a habit of reading among other age group.
In 1990, about 40% of Use synonyms
people
would do reading, followed by 51-to65-year-old Use synonyms
people
who made up 35%. Use synonyms
By comparison
, the youngest age group (18-25) accounted for over 15%, the lowest number of all groups.
Over the next 20 years, Linking Words
people
18-50 years old who love to read decreased, Use synonyms
whereas
Linking Words
people
aged 51-65 plus who read books increased. The number of Use synonyms
people
aged 18-25 who read fell substantially from roughly 17% to nearly 5%. The change in the figure of youngsters fluctuated the most. Use synonyms
In contrast
to the oldest groups, there was a small rise in the figure for readers aged 51-65 plus.Linking Words
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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