A large number of young people cannot find a job after leaving school. What problems will youth unemployment cause for individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among young people?

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greate

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great

greater

number of graduates are facing difficulties in finding proper

job

opportunities

.

This

situation can cause harm to both youngsters and

the

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society

and various actions should be taken to tackle

this

problem. Youth unemployment has negative effects on

people

and

society

. Difficulties in finding proper jobs related to the topics they have studied in school

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will lead to both mental and financial

crisis

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for our younger generation. They came a long way, studying hard and preparing themselves for their future career prospects and

this

lack of

opportunities

for proving themselves can result in depression. They may feel all the effort they put

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studying was useless and they are unneeded.

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these circumstances, comparing themselves with others

whom

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are successful in their career can develop a feeling of unfulfillment and along

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these negative feelings financial difficulties

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another burden.

Furthermore

, these ambitious young

people

with a great amount of energy who could be a help to

country's

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development now can cause harm to

society

. Financial problems stack upon depression, can lead to bad decisions

such

as stealing stuff out of need or anger towards

society

. So, lack of

job

opportunities

can harm individuals and those desperate

people

can have negative effects on

society

. Several actions can be taken to solve

this

problem.

Firstly

, companies should give younger

people

a chance to prove themselves.

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, I can remember my resume being disqualified because

my

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lack of empirical

experiences

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experience

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when I applied for jobs right after graduation.

Secondly

, big companies can offer various internship programs where

undergraduated

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undergraduate

undergraduates

students can be trained there and gain some good work

experiences

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experience

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.

Finally

, the

supportings

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supporting

and

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conditions after retirement should be well organized so

people

retire at the right age so there would be

opportunities

for younger

people

. So, to tackle these problems, companies and government should prepare the

job

market and have faith in our young ones. In conclusion, the increasing rate of unemployment among young

people

can cause a

society

to

loose

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its fresh and young energy

due to

depression and financial crisis and

this serious problems

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should be solved by preparing the

job

market and trusting our younger

people

.