WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Write at least 150 words.
Firstly
, this
pie chart gives information regarding energy
in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s with in
five categories. These are ‘Oil, Natural gas, Coal, Hydroelectric Power, Nuclear Power’.
Correct your spelling
within
Secondly
, when we look at the panel Oil has
42% in 1980 and 33% in 1990. Wrong verb form
had
According to
panel
1980s Correct article usage
the panel
has
the highest oil rate. Wrong verb form
had
On the other hand
, Natural gas has 26% in 1980 and 25% in 1990. It seems that almost equel
. Correct your spelling
equal
Moreover
, Hydroelectric power and Nuclear power are virtually unchanged. Furthermore
, looking at the table again Coal was
increasedUnnecessary verb
apply
5
% in 1990. Change preposition
by 5
Overall
, the most rising
rate is oil. Correct word choice
highest
Nonetheless
, coal has a high percentage.
All in all, the diagram which is above mentioned describes the sources of energy
in the USA. As an extra, this
chart is remark ratio at
sources of Change preposition
of
energy
. From my point of view, we see that energy
resources is
the much rather in the USA.Verb problem
apply
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