The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar charts bar chart illustrates the major reasons for
study
between students of different age
groups and the amount of support
from employer
to them. When Fix the agreement mistake
employers
consider
together, the information suggests that there are some Wrong verb form
considered
link
between Fix the agreement mistake
links
it
.
The majority of Correct pronoun usage
them
reason
for Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
study base
on Replace the word
studying based
age
of student is under 26 around 80% because they want to achieve their career Add an article
the age
in
Change preposition
at
the
young Correct article usage
a
age
. Meanwhile, students which
Correct pronoun usage
who
study
for interest
only 10%. It correlates to the
workplace assistance Correct article usage
apply
due to
the employer
give
the biggest Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
back up
for under 26 Correct your spelling
backup
age
students who chase their profession about
60% which is the highest. Change preposition
at about
The
Correct article usage
Employer
employer
support
also
have
two Change the verb form
has
association
with the Fix the agreement mistake
associations
age
Fix the agreement mistake
ages
from
26 Change preposition
apply
until
29 and 30 to 39 Change preposition
to
that
the lower of Correct word choice
apply
person
who Fix the agreement mistake
people
study
for
reach their career and the higher of people who Change preposition
to
study
for their interest
, the Corporate assistance become less.
Fix the agreement mistake
interests
However
, in the age
of 40 to 49 and over 49, the numbers of workplace assistance are
not correlate with both Verb problem
do
of
reasons to Change preposition
apply
study
because it have
the same percentage approximately 40% Change the verb form
has
while
the number of corporate support
increases around 45%. But, when the reason of
Change preposition
for
study
for interest
touch
70%, the Change the verb form
touches
employer
support
change
Change the verb form
changes
into
50%.
Change preposition
to
Overall
, the figures suggests
a possible association between the number Change the verb form
suggest
young
and old Change preposition
of young
age
to study
for interest
and career. However
the correlation is not consistent.Add a comma
However,
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words study, age, support, employer, interest with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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