The graph below shows the average number of movies seen in a theater per year, by age group. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The line graph compares the mean number of films casted in a film hall each year, according to 3 age groups.
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The graph illustrates the changes in
movies
seen a theaters by age group from 18 to 65 years old. Overall
, there is a great difference between 2000 and 2015.
It is clear that
the movies
seen in a theatre occurred during the period. In 2000 the number of movies
seen in theaters for ages
18-24 was 10 movies
, and it went up slowly to 12 movies
for ages
24-44 years, the significant increase can be observed in ages
45-65 it was 16 movies
. As can be seen, in 2005 number of movies
seen in theatres by ages
18-and 25 increased to reach 12 movies
, and then
the ages
of 25-and 44 watching movies
in theaters decreased slightly to 10 movies
, steady in the ages
45-65 has
shown upward movement to become 14 Unnecessary verb
apply
movies
. As shown, in 2010 the number of movies
seen in theatres for the ages
of 18-24 remained stable compared to 2005, and then
for the ages
of 25-44 it decreased dramatically to become 6 movies
, and then
the ages
between 45-65 seen movies
in a theatre rose up to reach 15 movies
.
From an overall
perspective, it is obvious that there are several differences between ages
18-24, 25-44 and 45-65.Submitted by walkuwari11 on
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