The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005 . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
Given are the maps depicting some striking changes at the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005.
As is illustrated in the maps, by 2005 there were several new developments that showed an improvement
to
amenities and reflected new trends in the town.
By 2005,main improvements had been made to the houses and roads.Change preposition
in
Moreover
, one of the main advancements of the town seemed to be the new airlines.In 2005, the north apex of the resort and left
side of the river were used for the new living apartments. In 1990,Correct article usage
the left
west
side of the river and an area under the 2 crossing roads were houses which by 2005 had been cleared to make a huge supermarket.
In 1990, the north-west area of the resort which was near Correct article usage
the west
to
the sea was full of small apartments and by 2005, there had been constructed multi-storey houses Change preposition
apply
instead
. In 2005, the north-eastern part of the urban area had significant developments such
as factory
and a new stretch of railway running directly west.Correct article usage
a factory
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