The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about energy consumption in the USA since 1980, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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graph represents the amounts of energy that have been used as a fuel and its source, through the times between 1980 to 2030, which is actually a projection of the future. Petrol and Oil are by far in the lead in terms of consumption,
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may reach 50 quadrillion units in 2030, followed by Coal and Natural Gas in the second score with around 25 to 30, for the third place, its Nuclear, Solar/Wind, and Hydropower with 2.5 to 10. it is so obvious that the usage of power is increasing over time,
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, there is a difference in the rate of increase between them, Petrol, Oil, Coal, and Natural Gas have the highest quota, but Nuclear, Solar/Wind
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and Hydropower are kind of steady.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • trends
  • marked increase
  • dominant source
  • modest increase
  • projections
  • renewable energy
  • nuclear energy
  • noticeable decline
  • span
  • petroleum
  • natural gas
  • coal
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