The diagrams below show the stages and equipement used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipement used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The illustrations depict the process of producing
cement
and
subsequently
how that
cement
is utilized to make concrete. The graph shows that
cement
manufacture involves some complex procedures, and concrete is made by mixing water,
cement
, and sand in a concrete mixer. The first diagram demonstrates how to create
cement
by crushing limestone and clay and passing the resulting powder through a mixer. The electricity is
then
sent through a revolving heater, where heat is constantly supplied, and
this
process produces raw
cement
materials, which are
subsequently
passed through a grinder machine to form the
cement
. The
cement
is
subsequently
packaged and offered for sale. The second diagram depicts how concrete is made for housing and construction projects. In the first stage, 15%
cement
, 10% water, 25% sand, and 50% small stones are combined in a concrete mixer machine, which rotates quickly to mix the ingredients together to form the concrete.
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