WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the changes in the percentage of people taking different courses at a college in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie charts below show the changes in the percentage of people taking different courses at a college in Canada.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The two pie charts give information about the percentage of students registering for different courses at a College in Canada in the years 2000 and 2006. coverall, In 2000, medical technology made up the highest
course
in the college,
while
geodetic engineering was the smallest
course
.
In contrast
, In 2006, Civil Engineering became the target superset
course
in that period and the lowest was made by the pharmacy
course
. In 2000, chemical engineering
course
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increased slightly by 1% only in 2006.
however
, civil engineering was 15% in 2000
,
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and grew significantly to 27% after six years.
Additionally
, mechanical engineering
rises
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quickly a approximately 9% in 2006.
Also
, Geodetic engineering made up 8% of majors and these figures rose moderately to 10%. whilst , medical technology
course
was 21% in 2000 , and decreased considerably to half in 2006.
In addition
,pharmacy major accounted for 7% , and
go
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down rapidly in the second period which was in 2006 .
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words course with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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