WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show the changes in the percentage of people taking different courses at a college in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The two pie charts give information about the percentage of students registering for different courses at a College in Canada in the years 2000 and 2006.
coverall, In 2000, medical technology made up the highest
course
in the college, while
geodetic engineering was the smallest course
. In contrast
, In 2006, Civil Engineering became the target superset course
in that period and the lowest was made by the pharmacy course
.
In 2000, chemical engineering course
increased slightly by 1% only in 2006. Fix the agreement mistake
courses
however
, civil engineering was 15% in 2000,
and grew significantly to 27% after six years. Remove the comma
apply
Additionally
, mechanical engineering rises
quickly a approximately 9% in 2006. Wrong verb form
rose
Also
, Geodetic engineering made up 8% of majors and these figures rose moderately to 10%.
whilst , medical technology course
was 21% in 2000 , and decreased considerably to half in 2006. In addition
,pharmacy major accounted for 7% , and go
down rapidly in the second period which was in 2006 .Wrong verb form
went
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words course with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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