The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided graph compares the total
number
of books
read by 2 genders at Burnaby Public Library in a period of 3 years from 2011 to 2014. Overall
, men
read more and more books
throughout the years and women
's interest in reading had a decline near the end of the period.
In 2011, there were only around 3000 books
read by men
, meanwhile
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meanwhile,
women
read almost 5000 of them. In the next year, the number
of books
read by both genders increased, 4000 books
by men
and 8000 books
by women
. In 2013, a
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books
. Women
also
rose steadily to the same number
of books
read by men
. However
, at the end
of the period in 2014, men
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of books
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number
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