The chart below shows the literacy rates of three different contries between 1930 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The chart below shows the literacy rates of three different contries between 1930 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The line chart illustrates the literacy rates of America, Asia and Africa from 1930 to 2000.
Overall
, it is clearly sin to
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for three different countries were an upward trend . The
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for Africa increased about 10% between 1940 and 1950.
Then
,the
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did not change much from 1950 to the final year.
According to
the chart, the
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for Asia
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deadly over the 70-year period.
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started around the percentage of 39 in 1930.
However
, the
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was reached at almost 82 in the final year. And the
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for North America climbed slightly between 1930 and 2000.
To sum up
, the literacy rates
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Asia increased
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subsequent 70 years.
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