In past , the role of teacher was to provide information. Today, students have access to wide sources of information. There is , therefore, no role of teacher in modern education. Do you agree or disagree?

It cannot be denied that nowadays
teachers
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role
as
information
provider
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has been replaced by the
internet
.
This
has made some people
to
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believe that
teachers
have no more
role
in modern education.
However
, some see it in a different light. In my view,
teachers
still have
important
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role
in
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modern education. These days, it is true that with the help of the
internet
, it is easy for
students
to access wide sources of
informations
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information
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. They can learn many
things
that they did not get at
school
.
For example
, they can learn about subjects
such
as economics or programming and even
looking
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for
explanation
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explanations
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of topics that
teachers
at
school
did not cover. In short,
internet
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has been a big help for
students
to learn many new
things
.
However
, the
role
of a
teacher
is not only
provide
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information
for
students
. There are a lot more
of
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things
that
students
can learn from their
teachers
.
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Attitude
and morals,
for instance
, are
things
that can
also
be teach
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by
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a teacher
the teacher
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teacher
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teachers
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at
school
. In brief, there is a lot more
of
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teacher's
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a teacher's
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role
other than providing
information
to their
students
.
Teachers
can
also
be a person that children can
trust
when they are in
school
. If they have problems at
school
, they can talk to the
teacher
that they
trust
.
For example
, when there is a student who
get
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bullied by their friends,
this
student can talk to the
teacher
that they
trust
or when they have problems in a subject, they can ask their
teachers
. In conclusion, when children are in
school
,
teachers
are the person they can turn to when they are in need.
To conclude
, it is true that, unlike in the past
where
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students
came to a
teacher
for
an
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information
a piece of information
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information
,
internet
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the internet
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has been
such
a big help for
students
to learn many
things
.
However
, there are a lot more
of
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teachers
' roles other than providing
information
.
Teachers
can
also
be the person
students
trust
when they are in
school
.
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