The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture shows a natural process known as the
water
cycle which contains
water
movements above and under the ground.
Overall
, the various stages of the cycle can be put into 4 major phases namely evaporation, precipitation,
water
journey on the ground and intrusion with salt
water
. The entire process begins with the
water
evaporating in the air
due to
the heat from the sun. It is estimated that 80% of total
water
vapour is taken from the oceans. The
water
vapours are
then
condensed which results in the formation of clouds. In the subsequent step, during the precipitation, the
water
pours
in
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the lakes or is absorbed into the ground. The surface runoff
,
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creates the groundwater and
then
flows back to the ocean without reaching the impervious layer.
Finally
, saltwater intrusion occurs shortly before groundwater enters the oceans to complete the cycle.
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