WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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Firstly
, this
pie chart gives information regarding the consumption of fish
and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. This
table has 6 years. These are ‘1979, 1984, 1989, 1994,1999 and 2004’.
Secondly
, when we look at the panel fish
had 60gr in 2004. Neither up nor down over the years. After that, lamb had 150gr in 2004 and Beef had 240gr in 1984. Nonetheless
, the chicken
had 250gr in 2004. Therefore
chicken
is the most overwasted. As an extra, it was the consumed fish
. By the way, chicken
was consumed. Later on, the lamb had 60gr in 2004. Add an article
the chicken
Also
, lamb was consumed at least in 2004.
All in all, the diagram which is above mentioned describes fish
and meat consumption. From my point of view generally, people prefer chicken
more than others. Furthermore
, beef was opted. Taking everything into account, meat consumption increased in 1984 and 2004.Submitted by eylulelveren7 on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, gr, chicken with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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