The graph below shows the percentage of part-time workers in each country of the United Kingdom in 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the graph is
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the Correct your spelling
introducing
part time
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part-time
of
personnel working within Change preposition
apply
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the united
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United Kingdom
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several
contruties
to compare between them.
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countries
contributes
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between years 1980 and 2010 on the Wrong verb form
compares
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incentives
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gained by the workers. the Add a missing verb
have been
comparision
is taking place between England, Northern Ireland, Scotland and Wales, where Wales Correct your spelling
comparison
showing
the highest wages across the four Wrong verb form
shows
counties
and have
slightly Correct subject-verb agreement
has
increase
from 1980 and 2010. the Wrong verb form
increased
increase
is demostrated
across most of Correct your spelling
demonstrated
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Kingdom cities except Northern Ireland where it shows Correct article usage
the United
minimum
decrease Add an article
a minimum
from
1980 and 2010. the sharpest Change preposition
between
increase
occured
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occurred
on
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in
scotland
by 10% which Change the capitalization
Scotland
indicate
the Correct subject-verb agreement
indicates
healthly
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healthy
among
the city.
on the Change preposition
in
the
hand, the year 1980 Remove the redundancy
apply
demonstrate
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demonstrates
counties
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compared
year
2010 where the average salaries Change the article
the year
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do
dramatic
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a dramatic
increase
. the potential reason is that inflation occured
throughout the years Correct your spelling
occurred
occurs
where
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which
it
has Correct pronoun usage
apply
possible
impact on Add an article
a possible
workers
income. Change noun form
workers'
worker's
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example, if we look into the four Capitalize word
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counties
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could clearly tell that Change the capitalization
I
majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
counties
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their part time to tackle the
life Correct article usage
apply
expinceses
.
in Correct your spelling
expenses
conclution
, the worker Correct your spelling
conclusion
part time
generally is getting increased as we go through the years Add a hyphen
part-time
as a result
of external factors that required
to be challenged toward reaching Add a missing verb
are required
stable
economy within Correct article usage
a stable
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Kingdom.Correct article usage
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Vocabulary: Replace the words counties, increase with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 6 times.
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