Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and five your own

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It is true that some people believe
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and
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should be taught in separate
schools
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.
while
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others think that it is beneficial to
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them in the same
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.As far as
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concerned, I strongly agree that they should be educated in different
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. In
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essay, I will discuss
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points of view. On the one hand, some people argue that
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and
girls
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should be taught in separate
schools
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.One of the main reasons can be that
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and
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have
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separate
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identities meanwhile they have different upbringings.
Boys
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have separate
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roles as compared to
girls
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. Another reason can be that
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of them have different social
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they
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apply
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play in
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society which they can learn from their parents
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to
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educate in
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schools
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.
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, cultural festivals celebrated in the school depicted the social and
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role
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of
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and
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.
therefore
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it is very compulsory to educate
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boys
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and
girls
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to
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in different
schools
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.
On the other hand
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,there are other people
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believe that
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and
girls
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should attend the same
schools
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because it helps them to understand the opposite
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.
Boys
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and
girls
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can better understand the other's point of view because a school is a primary place where students can meet with different age fellows.Another reason can be
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genders can groom their personalities
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they can enhance their skill because
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of them show their talent.
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However
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they experience less competition in the
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same-gender
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gender
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schools
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.
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, in one
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it has been shown most of the
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in the USA are co-educated.
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,
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point
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of
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have their own pros and cons. Sometimes it is important to
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in
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same-
gender
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gender
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school
therefore
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strongly agree with
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notion .

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Aim for a more balanced discussion by elaborating equally on both perspectives.
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coherence cohesion
You have clearly presented your viewpoint and structured the essay with a logical introduction and conclusion.
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You provided relevant points and examples to support your arguments.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • single-sex schools
  • mixed-gender education
  • gender-specific teaching techniques
  • stereotypes
  • real-world preparation
  • distraction-free environment
  • holistic development
  • social integration
  • interpersonal skills
  • collaborative learning
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