Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and five your own

It is true that some people believe

boys

and

girls

should be taught in separate

schools

.

while

others think that it is beneficial to

study

them in the same

schools

.As far as

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concerned, I strongly agree that they should be educated in different

schools

. In

this

essay, I will discuss

both

points of view. On the one hand, some people argue that

boys

and

girls

should be taught in separate

schools

.One of the main reasons can be that

girls

and

boys

have

their

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separate

gender

identities meanwhile they have different upbringings.

Boys

have separate

gender

roles as compared to

girls

. Another reason can be that

both

of them have different social

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play in

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society which they can learn from their parents

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educate in

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schools

.

For example

, cultural festivals celebrated in the school depicted the social and

gender

role

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of

boys

and

girls

.

therefore

it is very compulsory to educate

both

boys

and

girls

to

study

in different

schools

.

On the other hand

,there are other people

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believe that

boys

and

girls

should attend the same

schools

because it helps them to understand the opposite

gender

.

Boys

and

girls

can better understand the other's point of view because a school is a primary place where students can meet with different age fellows.Another reason can be

both

genders can groom their personalities

additionally

they can enhance their skill because

both

of them show their talent.

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they experience less competition in the

same

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gender

schools

.

For instance

, in one

study

it has been shown most of the

schools

in the USA are co-educated.

To sum up

,

both

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of

views

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have their own pros and cons. Sometimes it is important to

study

in

the

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same-

gender

gender

school

therefore

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will

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strongly agree with

this

notion .