The three pie charts show the production and consumption of tea and where the profit goes around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The three pie charts show the production and consumption of tea and where the profit goes around the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The chart provides information on the percentage of consumption, production, and profit distribution of tea around the world. The data clearly shows that
while
Europe is responsible for its largest consumption, South Africa is the biggest producer. In the case of the demand, the first place is occupied by Europe with 41 per cent. America,
on the other hand
, is right behind it, with 39% of
overall
consumption.
Then
, Japan
,
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is responsible for only 8 per cent, and the rest of the world for 12%. Supply,
in contrast
, has been more diversified. The largest producer is South Africa,
while
Indonesia, Japan, and Vietnam share similar scores at the level of 22%, 18%, and 16%, respectively. The distribution of the profit is dominated by delivery with 51 per cent.
Subsequently
, there are retailers with 24% and producers with 15%.
However
, the least lucrative ones are exporters with only 10% of profits.
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